A Wrimo Remembers: Episode 1

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I’m not participating in NaNoWrimo this year, but I did take part a few years ago. I didn’t reach the 50,000 word finish line, but the experience taught me a lot about the perseverance and humility needed to be a writer. In what I hope will be inspirational to Wrimos everywhere, and especially my newly discovered writing friends, I will be re-posting short excerpts from blog posts I wrote while trying to type 50,000 novel-shaped words. I will also post some of the unfinished, barely paragraphed, unproofed, and so very raw book itself. Working titled, My Soul to Find, the story’s about a jaded ad executive who decides to thwart the political campaign of a recently acquired client. Enjoy!

from “Overture, Curtain, Lights”, Oct 31, 2007

Believe in your characters. Believe in their environment. Know that when you stare at a blank screen, the screen is staring back, accusing you. Your only requital is to fill that screen with words. Now, write Wrimos! Write!


from Chapter VIII, (Jason is the main character)

Early March in Preston was beautiful. A rapidly growing city close to North Carolina’s Piedmont, the main roads leading into town were lined with ancient trees. Their boughs stretched into comforting arches that overshadowed the streets. Like many southern towns, Preston’s economy was transitioning from agriculture to technology. It was happening all over the south, but a little bit slower than expected in Preston. While younger residents welcomed the change, many descendants of the town’s original land barons were not happy with the resulting increases in the transplant population. Their rage was not specifically directed toward Yankees, but there was a nearly phobic distrust and intrensic dislike of people who weren’t originally from the surrounding area. And a special disdain still existed for people who came from above the Mason-Dixon line.

That disdain immediately put Jason at odds with the locals when he moved to Preston years ago. His unaccented midwestern English was often mistaken for a northern dialect. The misconception never led to a physical confrontation, but it frequently earned him what he came to label the Universal Stare. It was a way the locals had of acknowledging, assessing, and dismissing a person with a single glance. Mythical southern hospitality often prevented people from engaging him directly with the Stare. So it was usually administered by persons along his periphery, for instance, nearby customers who overheard him ask for unsweet tea. Shortly after relocating he developed the disarming habit of staring back for a brief moment before smiling and drawing the perpetrator into idle banter. Most of the time the stranger’s Pavlovian response was to smile back and exchange some equally shallow conversation. What started out as a game soon began to net him seemingly arcane, but increasingly valuable information. Where to buy the best collards (a roadside stand five miles west of town: one dollar a head and no worms), who to trust for a ten dollar haircut (Melvin Watts: serving black and white patrons for forty years), and who to see about a broken transmission (Junior Colt: his full disability status restricted the amount of money he could earn, but he did expert work).

Grocery store check-out lines, gas pumps at convenience marts, playgrounds in local parks: This thread of casual conversation actually formed the pipeline through which important information passed. But every benign tidbit passed along by this human grapevine had its darker counterpart. If one learned that the librarian’s daughter gave birth to a healthy boy one day, the next day (perhaps while buying socks at Wal-Mart) would bring news that the father of the baby wasn’t the girl’s husband (He was stationed in Iraq). It wasn’t gossip; the continuous flow was usually based on substantiated information from knowledgable sources. In fact, the vetting of facts through the local grapevine was often more rigorous than research done by evening news anchors.
It was through one of these interactions that Jason first began to suspect that Ted Jannock’s motives for running for Senate weren’t altogether pure. He didn’t expect the man to be squeaky clean; what politician was? His personal research showed Jannock to be a very capable consensus builder. He made sure his successes got maximum exposure, while downplaying his failures. Jason was ready to accept the proverbial bad with the good. Jannock looked toward the future; that was a good thing. Like Jason, he could see a time when the good ‘ole boy network would have to give way to the infusion of young new blood. Preston’s future citizens were citizens of the world. Black, white, red, brown: the next generation was more concerned with the color of their tap water than the color of their neighbor’s skin. They viewed the once accepted, casual racism of small towns as a hindrance to growth. Jason saw Jannock as the kind of man that could govern this new constituency. He wasn’t about to withdraw his support of the man based on one or two shady deals. It was only whisperings from the pipeline that encouraged him to dig a little deeper.

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Mind the Return on Investment

Thumbing through Information Week magazine I noticed three or four QR-coded ads in the first 10 pages. You know QR codes, those square, bar code looking thingies you scan with your phone, and they teleport you to a webpage or application. You can actually store more information than web addresses in them, a resume for instance. While cool and useful, they have been slow to take off with the general public. Information Week is a trade publication for the information technology industry. It’s very techy and jargony. Seeing so many QR codes there is an indication of their core audience at the moment.

Facebook has become the QR code of branding in my life. Although an article by literary agent Rachelle Gardner advises against substituting platform building for writing, I have spent a considerable amount of time connecting with other writers and generally learning about my potential audience. My Facebook page is one part of that equation. But the returns so far are meager for the investment, and Facebook is unpleasant enough to make me consider leaving the platform entirely. There’s great potential in it, but energy is always lost in the conversion from potential to kinetic.

It’s a good lesson to learn quickly, once I figured out that writing consumes more time and energy than I ever imagined. The temptation to pursue every form of social media known to man is powerful, but I’m probably going to wean myself from Facebook very soon. This is not an FB bashing post, just a reminder to dump what’s not working in life, regardless of how shiny it is. And keep an eye on those QR codes. One day they’re going to be bigger than fried pickles.

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Embracing the eReader Metaphor: Kindle 4

Kindle 4 SO

I’m the happy new owner of an Amazon Kindle 4 SO (Special Offers). This is my first eReader. The recent design refresh and lower prices finally swayed me. Although there are probably more Kindles in the wild than Toyota Corollas, I thought some brief observations may benefit those contemplating their first eReader purchase.

If you read through as many reviews as I did on Amazon’s website you probably saw some unkind words for the new model. In fact, after only a few 1-star reviews, a couple of themes emerged. In no particular order, here are my experiences after a few days use. I should note my device arrived on-time, securely boxed, and pre-registered to my Amazon account since I bought it from them. On to the review.

Previous page ghosting

When an e-ink display changes “pages”, a faint, ghostly afterimage of the previous page’s words are left behind. Apparently a characteristic of electronic ink technology, the K4 exhibits this trait. The amount of ghosting is a topic of much concern in Amazon’s reviews. Some previous owners deem it to be unreasonably more than the previous generation of Kindles, especially since Amazon has indicated the screens are the same for K3s and K4s. The effect is more noticeable in bright sunlight than normal room interior lighting, and on pages with large amounts of whitespace. Even then, it wasn’t a big deal to me. The ghosting is alleviated by a complete screen refresh (marked by a brief dip to black) every 6th page turn. The currently available firmware update (4.01) lets you choose to refresh the screen at every page turn if this behavior bothers you.

Opinions and rants about this issue are all over the map, and it was my biggest concern before buying. After reading a complete novel before applying the firmware update I can say it’s not a problem for me. It’s there if you look for it, but I don’t think a first time owner will find it objectionable. Lose yourself in the book, not the display.

That issue solved, the display is simply awesome! It has crisp, readable letters with a choice of serif or sans serif font, as well as kerning/leading and size/orientation options. The “page” itself is a light gray, which I find preferable to stark white, especially for reading in bright light.

Size

The keyboard-less model is pretty small, smaller than the K3 (keyboard) model. I have moderately large hands, but was comfortable holding this device for long periods of time.

Page Buttons

Some reviewers dislike the new page forward/backward buttons. They are located on either side of the slim device and require a slight downward push to activate. I never used the previous design with page buttons on the bottom of the bezel, so I’m OK with these. Additionally, they don’t feel as flimsy to me as some reviewers have indicated. All in all, this eReader feels sturdy for the price.

Ads

Ads appear in a small band at the bottom of the home page, and as full page graphics in screensaver mode. The few I’ve seen are tastefully designed and unobtrusive. I’m looking at a local one now offering me 2/3 off a cupcake-decorating class  :-) Since they do not appear in reading mode, I wouldn’t consider spending $30 more to avoid them.

Amenities/Features

Kindle ships with The New Oxford American Dictionary and the Oxford Dictionary of English. The American version was chosen as default in my Kindle. Pressing the 5-way rocker switch in the bottom bezel up or down while in reading mode activates a flashing I-beam cursor that provides a definition for the word immediately to the right. The left and right buttons let you move the cursor from word to word along a line of text. Pressing the center button allows you to see the full definition, begin a highlight, or create a note. Kindle can connect with your Twitter and Facebook accounts to share annotations and excerpts about the book you’re reading… nice.

Wi-fi works well and the Kindle connects to AT&T Hotspots for free with no activation or sign-in. Hello Starbucks! There is one caveat to mention about wi-fi. If you secure your home or work network with long, random alphanumeric sequences, don’t use the pipe | symbol. You won’t find it on Kindle’s virtual keyboard. Wi-fi can easily be turned off to conserve battery life. Speaking of batteries, Amazon expects around a month of use (wi-fi off, 1/2 hour a day) between charges.

A micro-USB cable (provided) allows you to charge the battery and transfer files/firmware updates to the unit. The provided cable is nice and long should you ever need to charge your Kindle while reading. A Kindle email address is also provided, so you can send documents to the device that way as well.

Overall Impression

I loved the Kindle from the moment I saw its display light up. The weight is nice and light. It’s legibility, contrast, and wide range of type adjustments make it a pleasure to read from, particularly outside. Everyone I’ve shown it to is amazed at the e-ink display and using it is mostly intuitive. A key element for me is being able to take a good book (or entire library!) with me anywhere.

So can Kindle ever replace dead tree media? Those of us who remember the endless hours of discovery; the feel of paper; and yes, the smell of wood, ink, and whomever last touched a book will undoubtedly bristle at the notion. But a good book can take you anywhere, even beyond the confines of a digital reading device. Amazon describes the experience perfectly in the welcome letter that I assume ships with every Kindle purchased through them.

We hope you’ll quickly forget you’re reading on an advanced wireless device and instead be transported into that mental realm readers love, where the outside world dissolves, leaving only the author’s stories, words, and ideas.

At $79, Kindle 4 SO is a great value. If you’ve been waiting to purchase an eReader, don’t wait any longer.

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Blog Hop In Progress

Good afternoon writers! Nicole Pyles of The World of My Imagination is hosting a blog hop for writers today. Please visit her blog, follow her, and find a few more writers’ blogs to follow. I’ll do my hopping after work this evening.

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Missed Connections: A Theme, A Start

It’s Friday and today I’m posting my first contribution to the Friday Flash craze. The story, Surround Sound Morning, has a theme. Think about the Missed Connections section in the personals. Only extend the idea beyond its obvious relationship connotations. It’s about all the moments you’ve glimpsed some life-altering truth or essential beauty. Maybe you only realized it once the moment had passed. Or perhaps you understood the importance and acted on impulse. It’s a theme I’ve been writing around and I plan to publish a collection of short stories woven with this thread. This story is much shorter than the others in this collection, so I thought it would be a good introduction. Enjoy!

Surround Sound Morning

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Ebookwars, Hash It Up

As ebooks and self-published authors continue to increase, news about the competition to define the dominant ebook format will proliferate. Based on an article about B&N pulling DC graphic novels after Amazon gained excluside e-publishing rights, I just defined #ebookwars as a proposed hashtag on WhatTheTrend.com. With the battlefield heating up, this tag can make it easier to search for info about this particular aspect of publishing. Let the ebookwars continue!

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Secret Shame of a Pantser

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I confess. Until now I’ve been a pantser. Long after giving up the romantic notion of the writer who, possessed by inspiration, channels creativity from on high until the keyboard letters melt off in a blinding flash, I continue to start stories with no clear path to the finish line. For me, this is the first level of writing hell: plotting. Some think the first level is coming up with ideas worth fleshing out. That hasn’t been a problem for me. I’ll do well to finish the pile of plotlines I keep in my idea file. But having to diagram a story I haven’t written feels somewhat counterintuitive.

I suppose the last shred of romantic in me thinks a story worth writing will whisper in your ear like a siren, or a mother cooing lullabies to her newborn.

Type away writer.
Tell pretty lies.
You will be famous.
Once the ink dries.

Witness the results. I have one unfinished Nanowrimo novel, one unfinished screenplay, and I’ve recently started another novel. They all feel like they will be entertaining and commercially viable finished products. The intros and exposition for each nearly wrote themselves. Then one by one the characters began to scurry into dark recesses where plotlines faded like lane markings on an old highway.

So today I’ve made a decision. This aspiring writer has given up his pants… so to speak. Less plodding, more plotting. That’s my new mantra. You can come out now characters. I will write in shame no more.

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Bye Bye BAM: The Silver Lining

Every cloud has a silver lining. I combed the ashes of the local Books-A-Million with dozens of bargain seekers looking for that lining. The store hadn’t had that many customers at one time since its opening. Stacks of pallets now occupy corners of the store and wait for the remains. I flipped through some interesting paperbacks on the promo isle, but they were $16 – $20+. For perspective, you can buy an ad-sponsored Kindle for about the price of five or six of those books. I did my share of parsing and settled on the two books above. Score one silver lining. RIP BAM.

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My Local Book Store Closes

Twelve years ago Books-A-Million opened in my town. We already had a B. Dalton in the mall, but the superstore meant more magazine and book selections, as well as coffee, snacks, and a place to sit and read. Wi-fi came later. For a town that still considers tobacco a source of pride, a proper book store offered some much needed intellectual balance. Before they opened, the nearest comparable book store was 45 minutes away.

Last week the local BAM announced it’s closing this Saturday. Despite the misleading banner in the picture, this is actually one of four stores across North Carolina to shutter its doors. A glance at the company’s 2011 Annual Report reveals two familiar trends: significant decreases in retail sales and increases in electronic commerce sales (driven by Nook e-readers and e-book sales) compared to 2010′s numbers. Second quarter 2012 results continued the slide with a 26-week net sales decrease of 11.2% from 2011. But entertainment and kid’s titles continue to perform well. I think the depressed economy has forced parents to retask their shrinking entertainment and gift budgets. To save money, many are sharing their childhood love of reading with their children. At least that’s my theory and hope.

Regardless of the cause behind growing e-book sales, it’s encouraging news for new writers and others who haven’t cracked the traditional publishing market yet.

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Eric-Blues Gets A Facelift

Although I’ve been testing the new theme for a few days, today is the official launch of the redesign. It’s nothing earthshaking as far as redos go. But I did separate writing from the other shiny objects that capture my attention, and I also added a contact form. For now, there’s a 55-word flash fiction nibble that I posted on Austin Briggs’ website last month. I’ll add more soon.

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